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My heart stood still on that Midnight
You At the window in the dark
Your shadow standing still as the thunder struck the earth
The blade clinched in your hand
Your eyes black but beautiful
Your tears and blood swirled on the floor
Your expression silent and lifeless the way the reaper left you for me to discover
I picked up the blade
I kissed your cheek and closed your eyes and carried you to the bed
I lay beside you and cried and tried to stop your bleeding
Here you are now dead, Just the way life liked you
Here you are now dead, The way life robbed me of how I loved you
Here you are now dead, The ultimate price everyone had to pay
Here you are now dead, So many words the reaper would not let me tell you
So now I must whisper my sweet sorrow and unforgiven secrets to you
So now I must hide your scars and try to heal and comfort what is left of you
So now I must pick up your pieces and fix your lifeless body
So now I must live in misery as you conceitedly took your own life as well took mine
Now my darling I hear voices, Your voice, my voice, everybody's voice in my head
Now my darling everything has gone silent at the end of the symphony
Now my darling I still clinch the reaper in my hand and wish to join you
Now my darling more then ever your voice hunts me
And I am scared because I don’t know how to accept death into my arms
And I am sad because I wish to hold you more then ever in my arms
And I am excited because I hear you in my heart and am ready to embrace you
And I am in fear of never being able to see you So let me end this sorrow and complete what the reaper should have started....
Took the Picture randomly off interent...I wrote it about someone close to me... and It was just something I wanted to try to see if I could come up with some kind of new creation..
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your-heart-is-pure Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
so meaningful. awesoem job ^^
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just-an0ther-d0t Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2005
Beautiful and very touching.
good job.
:+fav:
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crimsonjester13 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2005
that was.....beautiful,amazing!!! i loved it this is definetly one of my favs!! i loved the way u repeated the same words. very well written!!! i havent found a personal flaw in it at all-ITS WICKED-i love it!!!!!
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crimsonjester13 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2005
that was.....beautiful,amazing!!! i loved it this is definetly one of my favs!! i loved the way u repeated the same words. very well written!!! i havent found a personal flaw in it at all-ITS WICKED-i love it!!!!!
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crimsonjester13 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2005
that was.....beautiful,amazing!!! i loved it this is definetly one of my favs!! i loved the way u repeated the same words. very well written!!! i havent found a personal flaw in it at all-ITS WICKED-i love it!!!!!
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dark-faerie Featured By Owner May 17, 2005
*sob* beautifully sad.. love it.
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secretcries73 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2005
you should use the revised. it's great words, but the presentation lacks... whatever the word is.
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HeavenSent Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2005
God. Now this is what I'm talking about. Nicely written, great message and it hurts the heart. A plus, buddy!
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SarahSue Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2004   Traditional Artist
awww! i love this!
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blablaskunk Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2004   Writer
beautifully written!
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